[Mageia-dev] Notes about live CD

[Olivier Blin]

Wolfgang Bornath <molch.b at googlemail.com> writes:

> Some installed packages (hardware and language support) may not be
> needed on your computer.
> [ ] Check to remove unused hardware support
> [ ] Check to remove unused language support
>
> Here the option tells exactly and with no room for misunderstanding in
> one line what it is doing when checked or unchecked.

The "Check to" words are a bit too much, it's a checkbox, there should
be no need to say how to interact with it.

And specifying the "hardware and language" in the introduction sentence
will make harder to add more items later, since it would break the
string.

How about this?

Some installed packages may not be needed on your computer.
You can remove them to save space.
[ ] Remove unused hardware support
[ ] Remove unused language support

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Olivier Blin - blino