[Mageia-marketing] Installer texts

[Patricia Fraser]

Seb, thanks for the work! but: too big! remember the size of the splash
screens. Can you edit down very very hard, and come back with updates?

Each text needs to be around 15 words, as a rule of thumb (otherwise
there's no room for the picture), I think. Check the install screens
from both Esteban's and Guala's images and do a count.

Cheers!


> Hi Trish
> 
> Here are changes:
> 
> Mageia is more than just a Linux distribution, it's a community of
> users from many different countries. You do not need to be a
> programmer, to use or contribute to Mageia!
> 
> With Mageia you get lots of software choices: Gear up your desktop
> with the elegant KDE, the revolutionary Gnome or the lightweight LXDE.
> 
> Mageia's graphical control centre gives users, accessible control
> over their computer - from setting up user accounts, to helping with
> configuring hardware.
> 
> Or maybe something like this:
> 
> Mageia's graphical control centre makes it easy to open up graphical 
> tools for setting up user accounts, installing software, and
> configuring hardware.
> 
> Mageia has easily available software packages for creating 2D and 3D 
> graphics and animation.
> 
> Type documents, create databases, or create business
> presentations with the default office suite LibreOffice.
> Or try alternative softwares such as KOffice, Abiword, and Gnumeric.
> 
> Mageia can easily be used to browse the web, check email, and chat
> with friends, family, or co-workers.
> 
> Code, compile, debug and package - Mageia has development tools
> easily available for install.
> 
>  From Sebastian sebsebseb
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