[Mageia-webteam] release-notes.html edits

Dennis Griffin dennisgrif at gmail.com
Tue May 31 18:19:33 CEST 2011


I am not sure who should get this message but I have a comment about the
release-notes.html file.  The particiular file I am looking at is:

http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/mageia/distrib/cauldron/x86_64/release-notes.html

In the section "Using Mageia Control Center :" the contraction "do'nt" is
misspelled.  The apostrophe should be between the n and the t not between
the o and the n.  It appears twice in that paragraph.  It is better style
not to to use contractions...use "do not" instead.

Also, the file contains:

Mageia mirrors web application/a></div>

There needs to be a "<" in front of the "/a>"...

Dennis Griffin
541-479-3079
dennisgrif at gmail.com
http://griffin.isa-geek.net
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